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Tracy Hutchison
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Chorus?She was a Nashville honeyno room no car no money Ok I got four more lines before I could stop then I remembered the rules :D 
Tracy Hutchison
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Ahh but someone else may come up with a direction I didn't think of.  That's the beauty of these things.  :)
Tracy Hutchison
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Ok here's the rest of it.  Keep it or sweep it. she came to town to make the roundsbelting out that Country soundthinking stardom could be foundbut all that getting knocked aroundput her feet back on the ground
Tracy Hutchison
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Or this could replace some lines and be more repetative  She was a Nashville honeyno room no car no money
Tracy Hutchison
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Looks like it didn't paste right and my fix didn't take.It should have read:she came to town to make the roundsbelting out that Country soundthinking stardom could be foundbut all that getting knocked aroundput her feet back on the ground
Tracy Hutchison
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SO...altogether it's (too long?)She was a Nashville honeyno room no car no moneyshe came to town to make the roundsbelting out that Country soundthinking stardom could be foundbut all that getting knocked aroundput her feet back on the ground
Tracy Hutchison
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She got a weird double spacefrom her copy and paste so she made a faceand it looked like this    > <  /---\But I digress
Tracy Hutchison
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Yes, I like that. Are you saying (from your previous post) that verse two needs a rewrite to make it fit?
Tracy Hutchison
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V2Finally she got them good, she was Nashville’s starDespite it all she’d gone far  Finds herself in a spot light, in front of the worldNo more huddles in the parkShe made her mind up things would changeIn spite of what she’s heard them say   Something like that???