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(Sergio) Regarding Laurie
by BGJeff, member since Nov 17, 2004
60 songs |
Mike Prather recorded the very fun original version of this song about three years ago. When we were working on Sergio's CD , Sergio and Alex were in the mood to rock out a bit at the time they came to this one. Thus, they kept some of Mike's ideas and developed some new ones. I was taking a nap at the time, until Sergio woke me in a panic saying they needed two more lines for the song.
Regarding Laurie
Words by Jeff Mondak
Music by Mike Prather & Sergio Wals
Performed by Sergio Wals & Alex Stangl
My dear loving mother I write you this letter
In hope that our future together is better
The problem's much worse than a rash or a blister
As surely you know, it is Laurie, my sister
I'm certain that no one but Laurie's enjoying
The fact that she's loud and extremely annoying
She's ruined our lives with all of her scheming
But if I complain then I know she'll start screaming
I'm asking politely,
I plead with you nightly
But still you ignore my request
Don't bribe me with candy
Or say life is dandy
We both know my sister's a pest
She entered our home, I was never consulted
In all of these years only bad has resulted
I'm minding my business, she gets me in trouble
You're shopping for snacks and the bill's always double
You say that this summer we'll travel the nation
We need a solution before our vacation
The job must be done and it's yours for the doing
So take care of Laurie, or mother--I'm suing
I've asked you politely,
I've pled with you nightly
But still you've ignored my request
Don't bribe me with candy
Or say life is dandy
We both know my sister's a pest | Details:
Uploaded: Mar 1, 2009
Genre: Kids/Family
hifi Size: 2894 KB
lofi Size: 505 KB
Statistics:
Plays: 173
Reviews: 20
Favored: 17
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RJC
2009-03-01
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Ha! Thats some fun stuff right there! Love it! | jbthegeezer
2009-03-01
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This is a great write, I enjoyed this collaboration.
Jerry | Lijemtu
2009-03-01
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That was classic, ha. Loved it.
Bill | mlprat
2009-03-01
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:)))) ... Of course I like it. Sergio and Alex really livened it up. Well done chaps.
Mike | Beeswing
2009-03-01
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HaHa! What a fun song! I remember Mike doing this one...I like this version too.....great performance by Sergio and Alex! | teecee
2009-03-01
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Ha! Great song Jeff, right on the nose! T | Showdog-Studios
2009-03-01
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Vocals sound good. Enjoyed the lyric and production. Peace, Brad | rustyblake
2009-03-01
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Funny stuff and the music fits like a glove! Great work by all!
Rusty | geediane
2009-03-01
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HaHA! I remember feeling this way! I was four when my younger sister was born. Of course, my older sister was four when I was born, so I'm sure she went through it too. Great song!! | GrumpHarmony
2009-03-02
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Cool song Jeff. I like the performance by the guys. Fun stuff! | OD-OldDog
2009-03-02
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Very clever and cute song. Very nice write, I enjoyed it very much.
Old Dog | LoanShark
2009-03-02
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Fun stuff Jeff and very creative. Enjoyed. -Jerry | benjammin
2009-03-02
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Too cool! Fun song guys! Enjoyed it! | PamelaElaine
2009-03-03
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MELODICALLY I WAS HOPING FOR A CHANGE ABOUT 1 MINUTE INTO THE SONG. BUT, I STILL THOUGHT THE RHYTHM WAS RIGHT ON FOR THE LYRICS.
ENJOYED EVEN SO. THANKS FOR YOUR SUPPORT IN MY SONGS TOO AND I APPRECIATE ANY FEED BACK ON MY SONGS TOO. THAT IS WHAT SONGRAMP IS ALL ABOUT.
ENJOYED MY LISTEN, ALWAYS APPRECIATE EVERYBODYS STYLES. ISN'T THIS THE COOLEST THING?
PAMELAELAINE | dillon
2009-03-03
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Never had a sister, but my wife has... I got a chuckle from the tune as I was relating. | Rard
2009-03-03
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must can't say it enough how fun Sergio's voc texture is. how true it is with the sibling torment. apparently youz know my son and daughter. much fun, now go to your room!!!. thanks guys. | lps45s8tracks
2009-03-03
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(;AWESOME TITLE;)Drew me right in so glad it did.I'm a sucker for songs with someones naqme in the Title.Enjoyed Da Listen once again.Fun song.Your Songramp Bro.~(;Yrral Mallik;) | rhallcne
2009-03-04
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Great subject I came from a family of five kids. So I can relate but and say my brothers and sister are freind's as well. Thanks for sharing this great tune........rick hall | DaveRice
2009-05-27
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A really cute song... and the lyric just shines. Sergio did well. I appreciate your writing style and understand the difficulties involved in a co-write of this magnitude. Well done. | songhogg
2009-10-22
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Bro Jeff,Tha lyrics are well written an a dynamic performance,those guys are great!! Thanks Songhogg |
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